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gryfindor123 · A Freshman Posty: 3

Write a for and against essay. Napisz rozprawkę na temat zalet i wad używania Internetu (200-250 słów). W rozprawce:
• Podaj po minimum 5 wad i zalet posiadania i użytkowania Internetu
• Opowiedz się za lub przeciwko posiadaniu Internetu. Wyraź swoją opinię i podaj uzasadnienie.
• Opisz w jakich celach najczęściej używasz Internetu.

These days it is said a lot of about the net. Like everything net has a good and a bad aspects.

Let me start with advantages of the net.
Firstly the net is a part of world so everyone need to use it. People don’t use it only for games but also to work. Moreover, many of us can’t imaginative world without the net it is necessary thing in life lots of people.

Secondly we can use the net for learn. It is a good solution for disable people, who can’t leave their homes. In easy way they get education. In spite of this children use the net for learn, doing their homework or for their hobbies.
Furthermore we can use the net for chatting or for talking with our friends, send e-mails, sms and we economize on a phone.
But on the other hand when we use the net only for games or chatting we can being addicted, secondly some web sites are not suitable for children. Next threats are hackers and viruses. I use the Internet most often to buy on allegro, conversation with friends and seek the necessary information on the Internet. For example, materials for schools

All in all in spite of disadvantages of net everyone will use it because it is very important thing in these days.

[ Dodano: Nie 28 Lut, 2010 7:27 pm ]
Aha,jest to praca semestralna i mam jeszcze troche czasu na oddanie jej:) ale im szybciej tym lepiej bede miala z glowy:)) Z góry dziekuje:)

marcin · Wysłany: Nie 28 Lut, 2010 9:09 pm

Czy możesz napisać, gdzie się uczysz? Nie chodzi o konkretną nazwę i lokalizację placówki, tylko o rodzaj szkoły i etap edukacji. Polecenie jest co najmniej dziwne, a tym samym dość trudno się ustosunkować do zawartości pracy...

gryfindor123 · A Freshman Posty: 3

2 letnie liceum uzupelniajace na podbudowie szkoly zawodowej. wlasnie jestem na ostatnim semestrze...

marcin

Oto niezbędne poprawki językowe:

Like everything., THE net has ITS good and a bad aspects.

Let me start with THE advantages of the net.
Firstly, the net is a part of THE world, so everyone needS to use it.

...many of us can’t IMAGINE THE WORLD ...

IT is A necessary thing in the life of lots of people.

Secondly, we can use the net for learnING. It is a good solution for disableD people who can’t leave their homes. THEY CAN GET ACCESS TO EDUCATTION VERY EASILY. APART FROM THAT, children use the net for learnING, doing their homework or for their hobbies.
Furthermore, we can use the net for chatting or for talking with our friends, sendING e-mails, TEXTING and we CAN SAVE MONEY ON OUR PHONE BILL, TOO.
But on the other hand, when we use the net only for games or chatting we can BECOME addicted TO IT. Secondly, some web sites are not suitable for children. A FURTHER THREAT IS/ARE hackers and viruses.

... TO TALK TO MY friends and seek the necessary information on the Internet. For example, STUDY MATERIALS.
All in all, in spite of ITS disadvantages, EVERYONE USES THE INTERNET, BECAUSE it is A very important thing in these days.

Masz zamiar zdawać maturę?
Jeśli tak, idź do dyrektora tej szkoły, za którą zapewne płacisz, i powiedz, że osoba, która Cię uczy, nie ma pojęcia, co to jest matura z języka i jak jest oceniana i życzysz sobie chociaż ostatnie dwa miesiące zajęć mieć z kimś, kto jest egzaminatorem i wie, do jakiego egzaminu Cię przygotowuje. W przeciwnym razie niech Ci zwrócą pieniądze za szkołę, skoro zajęcia prowadzą tam jacyś niekompetentni nauczyciele, bo po prostu szkoda Twojego czasu i pieniędzy na przygotowanie do matury z takimi leserami.
Jeśli nie zdajesz, pewnie ta praca semestralna wystarczy i wszystko będzie OK.
Smutne, bardzo smutne, że ktoś Ci każe pisać taką rozprawkę.

majlo · Wysłany: Nie 28 Lut, 2010 11:43 pm

gryfindor123 · A Freshman Posty: 3

Wiec dziekuje ślicznie!!!!!!!!!!! bardzo mi pomogliscie:) oto gotowy, juz z Waszymi poprawkami tekx:) moze sie komus przyda:) aha jakby jeszcze cos nie bylo jak trzeba prosze o napisanie. Jeszcze raz dziekuje:))

These days it is said a lot of about the net. Like everything. The net has its good and bad aspects.

Let me start with the advantages of the net.
Firstly, the net is a part of the world, so everyone needs to use it. People don’t use it only for games but also to work. Moreover, many of us can’t imagine the world without the net it is a necessary thing in the life of lots of people.

Secondly, we can use the net for learning. It is a good solution for disableD people who can’t leave their homes. They cam get access to educattion very easily. Apart from that, children use the net for learning, doing their homework or for their hobbies.
Furthermore, we can use the net for chatting or for talking with our friends, sending e-mails, texting and we can save money on our phone bill, too.
But on the other hand, when we use the net only for games or chatting we can become addicted to it. Secondly, some web sites are not suitable for children. A further threat are hackers and viruses. I use the Internet most often to buy on allegro, to talk to my friends and seek the necessary information on the Internet. For example, study materials.

All in all, in spite of its disadvantages, everyone uses the internet, because it is a very important thing in these days.

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